The immortal

by heartofcold   Jun 28, 2005


My suicide
will be a good day for us all
the people will be cheering
and the angels will call,
the devils to come forth
to try to take my life again
but not this time
i was weak then
The Immortal!
they'd call me
they thought i understood
they thought that i could see
underneath my hood

I blackout,
and wakeup, their dead
somehow I had killed them
but they'll come back to dread,
the lost of their loved ones

but MY loved ones don't care
when I kill myself
they would not just stare,
they'd dump me in the dumpster
and leave me there to rot...
then I'd finally meet him,
the one that I had fought
to fight him forever again,
never to die...
The Immortal

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alex

    I've never seen a poem in this kind of form. I say it's very unique. Excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by heartofcold

    thank you guys soo much i'll have some more soon

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    brianna, It's so great. you express
    your thoughts wonderfully. keep it up.
    love you, Marjan