It's been along time nice to see you back writing! This poem is so true! I can relate it's hard to move on sometimes easier said than done. It takes time and after you are able to let go you will feel so much beter! Great write! Take Care! Brooke~

I can identify with this one. Very well done. Heartfelt. Lovely.

"I just have to take it as it comes
get up when i fall"

That's right. Just pick yourself up after you fall. Never give up.

xxx

Love it. Love it love it love it. I love your stuff. I've read some of your other stuff and you have quite a talent. Good Job. kilman = David B. 5/5

Great poem, and nice wording. Very heartfelt and honest. Keep up the good work.

Take care,
Renee

Wow, I love this poem awhole lot. You got some real talent. Keep it up! :) ~B

excellent poem great job

wicked i love this poem and the last line 'get up when i fall' is so true thanks i was depressed im feeling kind of happy now,

Can easily relate!! you did a very great job of writing this and was very creative in it too!! I loved it!! keep up the awesome work! 5/5

Good!realy good!! i am giving u a 5/5