WHEN I SAW HIM

by Kassie   Jun 29, 2005


When i saw him
I felt as if everything and everyone disappeared, except for him
Our eyes struck one another
and at that moment i was lost
It was as if i couldn't blink, i just stared
His beauty mesmerized me
He was like a rose among hundreds of weeds
The feeling i felt in my stomache
was in fact something i have never felt
It felt as if a million butterflies were swarming around in a small place
Everything about him was truly amazing
When i saw him
He sent me into a dreamy place

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bobbi

    great poem ***** i know how u feel!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by christina

    great poem. i like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    I love your poem! It's really good. I know exactly how you feel...but we won't go into that. Anyway, keep writing, you're doing an awesome job.