hey its short.. but its good!! thanks for commenting on mine! i hope you get a lot more!! im looking forward to reading more of yours to come!

lenee

nice poem, short but good.. deep and meaningfull.. keep up the good work. best regards, kane

good poem 5/5
thanks for the comment

Very Good Poem, Well, Heres my Favor in Return, Thank you for what u said, i appreciate it, Keep it up and Take Care PeAcE

NCRico-Suave

Some ancient wise old man once said: "Life is the greatest bargain; we get it for nothing."
Yeah I know life can be hard and all of that, but we've got to go throug it all to reach some happier times. Hang in there, better days will eventually come your way

Tim

cool....i like it.....later

-Jesus-

This is short but powerful and it reads really well, i like it !!!
<3 Charli XxX ~*~

It's short but it's damm powerful :)

You put alot of feelings and emotion in this poem with out over doing it, and writing too much. its very sort and simple, i love it!!

but if you realy do feel this way then you should look at getting help.

All my loving

Tim

Rock butt girl you can read mineand tell me wht you think

Wow. That's all I can really say with this poem. Beautiful comes to mind too.

Its short and gets to the point there is nothing that i would add or take from it and i love it, i dont know if i ever got back to you commenting on one of my poems but thanks for the comment and you keep up the good work

I agree with all who commented before.
It was truly an amazing work. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Much love...*Drew*