Comments : When it spills...(part one-Her side)

  • 18 years ago

    by TaTtErEdXhEaRt

    Good poem..5/5 i enjoyed it.

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    what did you like about it though? what was it about my poem?

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    aw i really like this poem! it's so creative and original! 5/5 most DEFINATELY!! awesome job,
    much love,
    Abcede >,<

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    WHY DO YOU LIKE IT????

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Nice poem. Just one question though, if you don't mind me asking...why were the "y"s in the words "your" "yourself" "you" things like that? Peaces, //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    all the y's in your and you in stuff are capitalized to show that the character whom is speaking conciders herslef less then the one whom she is speeking about. She feels that he is more important...