this is good

I really liked this poem. i can STRONGLY relate to it, and was even surprised at your mention of the GCSE's! (heyre not exactly perfectly known everywhere!). It was really well written, very honest and heartfelt. The only thing I'd suggest would be, for example changing '1st' with 'first', it just seems to interrupt the reader. But besides that it was a really good poem, I enjoyed it a lot, and its only on a rare ocassion you can REALLY relate to a poem. So very well done.

Good Flow I can relate to it
Nice job!! Keep it up!!!

I can relate, thx for r/c on my poem I appreciate it!

awsome write , keep it up

natalie

Ahh. I'm crying again. o.O This poem is awesome. Expecially if it makes me cry. Great job.

It's like a story, with a great beginning and an excellent ending :)

keep it up!

Oh, thats so sad. im so sorry that tis like that for you. 5/5

:'D brought a tear, cuz its so sad, but brought a smile, cuz it is so good! keep it up! 5/5