wow you got my attention so write more. your really good/ great at writting. hope that it wasnt about you tho, if u need to talk then e-mail me at Angelbear966@yahoo.com.
~*Angel*~

this is a really good poem and i cant wait to read more, good job

I like how you portrayed your feelings here, it's really captivating

Wow, incredible poem, i loved the imagery you used.
It's a beautifully written poem although fairly dark and twisted. Well done !! I liked it a lot !

Thanks for your comment on my poem, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

This is so kick azz!!! i love the suicidal stuff!!

This is so good
i can almost feel her pain
just wanting more!
xxxx
abby

Gd

This poem is my fav i read so far by you. i can sence the emotions in this. very good job. keep it up