VERY TOUCHING EXCELLENT POEM

Beautiful!! Good job and keep up the writing!

Beautiful touching poem! To find that kind of love happens once in a lifetime! I have yet to find it. Good detail loved the poem. I really enjoy love poems I just wish I could write them. I haven't written anything new I have been blank lately. Take Care! Brooke~

Aside from the first 2 stanzas, this poem was perfect. Great job, you must have worked very hard on this one. Keep it up!

I think it's a great poem, 5/5. You didn't keep the same rhyming pattern throughout the poem...it got a little confusing and messed up the flow...Sill a great poem!! Good job!

WOW GREAT JOB! BEAUTIFUL! ARE THE TWO WHO WROTE IT THE ONES IN LOVE? WELL ABSOLUTELY AMAZING,TOUCHES MY HEART, 5!

Thanks for the comments, nothing is perfect ;0

OH WOW!!!! I love this poem.. I give it more than a 5..Great job..it is awesome. I know how you feel..That is the way i feel for my b/f randall....Great poem

Gorgeous poem. I love it. You're a very talented writer :-)

awww i liked it good work 5/5

"I have been in love before,
But nothing compares to this.
You've touched my heart and soul,
In places others have always missed."

That is my favorite stanza.

I scrolled down before I read it and saw that you and someone else wrote this. Normally I think that a poem written by two people shows each individual style and can sometimes conflict with each other but I think you two put it together very nicely. The only suggestion I would make is to maybe drop all the commas... (I think) they take away from the flow as people tend to pause after commas. I don't feel that they are necessary, but it is your call. Nice write my friend! :) Take Care!

Never really thought of it that way, just use to comma's at the end always, good suggestion, will keep that in mind, thanks Natalie.

WOW, This was SO good and touching. Definitly 5/5

Beautiful poem!!! Absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work.