Interesting poem, very original. I like it. What gave you the idea to write from a rabbits perspective? Very neat.

Kalika

very intresting lol 5/5 never stop writing

Hey veri interestin poem.. i liked the rhyme schme keep up the good work!

Neato poem, check spelling in the title, unless its intended, take care

interesting poem. its different but very good

I agree with all... what gave you the idea to write a poem like this? It's definitely out of the ordinary. I enjoyed the adventure.

Great poem!
J

Could I use this poem in one of my Coursework assignments? it would work really well