a little repatative, normaly it works but the reitition in this one is a little irritating. i like the idea you have though! its cute, and i realy hate computers...
~blackrose

thats cute...very shel silversteen

lol funny i love reading shel silversteen this poem is very like what shel silversteen would write.... great job!

The Title Was Funny All By Itself, I Think You Had a Great Idea For a Funny Poem lol! But I Must Say I Didn't Totaly Get It All, Anyway I Gave It a "5" Keep It Up xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

lol very ummmmm ummmmm interesting is the word im looking for great poem though
Dee