Gothic Angel

by Iyla   Jun 30, 2005


An angel like no other
draped only in black
her lips red as blood
a face white as a porcelain mask

long black hair that covered her shoulders,
deep ice blue eyes
the Gothic angel
had her last cry that night

she had broken wings
and could no longer fly
people were so desperate
and wanted her to die

and so the goth beauty
died that night
because the hate in people
blinded their sight

they always judge
before they even know someone
they killed that Gothic angel
because she was differnet from everyone

* random write.. hope it's not to bad...*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pandorra13

    This has to be one of my top favorites on here. i love it, it's very well done. it also tells a true story, people judge to easily and hate what they dont understand

  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    A sad story with such beautiful descriptions! The first stanza was my favourite as I really liked the imagery.
    Good write =)
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lestat

    Beautiful
    People can be cruel cant they
    5/5
    Your writing is beyond perfection =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Wow that poem explains exactly how i feel i love all of your poems!
    -pip

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's not bad at all...infact it's amazing...and are you a gothic?

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