Comments : The end of my days

  • 18 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    Hey, I really liked this poem and it gave me goosebumps thinking of that, 200 in 3 days...wow...I hope you're starting to get over this disease...I did and I'm so thankful...

    I have two comments about the poem though...the 3rd stanza kinda breaks up the flow...and then the last 2 lines don't really go...ooh that rhymed! lol

    Great job on this, a ton of feeling into it I can tell...loved it!! 5/5!

    xoxo-Sierra Rae

  • 18 years ago

    by William Flores

    Great write! I really enjoyed the poem. and what do you mean theres no poems worthy of me? this one is great! and besides, i just turned 20 not too long ago so i'm not THAT old school lol... thanx for the comment and keep on writing!