Great job amanda, your poems have a lot of emotion put into them, i really like them.
Thanks for taking the time to look at mine!
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Wow... Extremely deep and meaningfull... You catch the readers attention with ease, and leave them speechless! Kind regards from Kane

I liked it, it puts out a great msg that suicide is more selfish then just you taking your own life cuz there'e other people out there who need you

gr8 message to all those addicted-to-the-knife people out there.. suicide is no temporary escape, and once uve gone ther, ther is no turning bak.. so b4 u do anythin, take a minuteto look at wat ull be leaving behind if u do it..
wel, got carried away.. bak to u, amanda.. i lovd ur poem, the words wer heartbreaking.. and i lovd ur rhyme.. i wrote a poem "Remember Me??" about suicide, too.. maybe u cud check it out sometime.. not many ppl liked it, tho.. lol
anywayz.. take care
keep up the faith

Very powerful poem! You're right suicide is not the route to take I am glad you realzie that! Well written once again. ~Brooke~

hey this was a good cutting poem all and all it took at the act to a more responsible level. Congrad I wrote two my self one called I Never Knew and the other was called You wanted this tell me what you think take care and great write I gave you a 5...

awwww very sad. but it was well written and had good emotion

this is sad and a good one at the ame time. a good one cuz ur still here and u can tell others how bad suicide is...
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~*~Ashley~*~

this is sad and a good one at the ame time. a good one cuz ur still here and u can tell others how bad suicide is...
im_tickled_pink69@yahoo.com
~*~Ashley~*~

Wow the comment after this poem hit home with me more than even the poem (the poem was great too tho:p) but seriously that was a brilliant comment at the end i agree so much i never could have stated it so beautifully!!!

Ana*

Love the poem, u put a lot of feeling in that , and got a good message across.

Great poem.
Lots of emotions, very touhing and meaningfull..
Loved reading it
Take care

Wow It Has Been A Long Time Since I Have Been On Here
You Always Knew How To Get The Attention Of The Reader Though
Great Job And A Great Message
Never Quit Writing...