Comments : Gone

  • 18 years ago

    by dwight

    Wow, the last lines are really great! At the beginging I got the impression, that it isn't just a picture you are creating, but it really happend to you.
    Of course I am sorry,
    but if something like this is the result of a A** like him, then it isn't (at least for us) so bad, because we get to enjoy your great poetic wisdom
    dwight

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    Wicked poem, well writen good stanza, and also plenty emotion. Keep up the good work. Take care hun, through pain comes cherish. You have shown that, and keep up the good writing. XXX Paul