Hello. This poem is really good I like it a lot. That's good that your niece is healthy now!! Well anyway I gave your poem a 5! Will you comment on my poems it would mean a lot. Thanks. Good JOb.

A couple tiny errors...

"Thats why I can no longer fell the pain in my arm," --Should be "feel"

"I mean your just a little kid" - Should be "you're"

I'm pretty sure about those corrections...I know it's sometimes easy to miss minor errors in your own work...

Anyways, I'm so glad she's no longer sick. The poem is heartfelt and personal. Nice job :)

xxx

thank u so much for voting on my poem!!^_^ ok, now i will say this, i did like the poem u wrote, i liked it lots, so keep the work up!

Love, JessI

P.S. i voted 5 for ur poem^_^

Hey! i loved this poem. really emotional. im glad your niece is all better...i lost family b4 its hard to go through. cya!!! keep it ^!