Hey i really liked this poem it was very good! thanx 4 reading my poem and commenting i will contenue to read your poems if you dont mind will you read " Hidden on the Inside" and tell me what you think!

very good i love it and keep it up 5/5 take care
peace rel.....

Good Poem, Try finding more expressive words to have a deeper feel and better flow, but hey we have our weakness, but its still a great poem, 5/5 keep it up

~David~ HuNky