that's kind of sad.but really good.It's has lots of feeling in it.
Tes

Its a wonderful poem. You told the story realy well. Great job

wow, just wow, i love this it has so much emotion... great poem! ilove the ending and the middle when I realized where you were leading to. great poem, simply great!

this poem needs no explanation. great job.

wow, very moving, ... small tears commin outta my eyes... amazing

very sad

it was really good and i could tell what it was about right away

keep up the good work
xoxo

Excellent and sad. 5/5