This was beautifuly heart wrenching. My love and support goes out to all the mourning mothers.

Great poem! Great imagery used for this poem. Excellent work. By the way, Welcome to the club :D Kind regards from Kane

WOW! That is really great! I really like the ending with how you reworded the beginning but, differently because you were there...5/5! Thanks for commenting on my poems...it meant a lot!

so much emotion you conveyed everything so well excellent job

Beautiful poem that moved me a lot. Also the part with the photo sheets, once I thought at remembering a lost love where the two splitted and then a love which was parted by death, so that means it made me think about it all and that's a very good sign. Great write 5/5 !!!

Keep it up
Lots of love
Sabine

Kinda short but amazing it really shows the feelings you have for your friend nice poem keep writing you're great