wow... lots of meaning, I could feel it. <3 keep writying. <3 xoxo
5/5

Outstanding. I love it. Great rhyming. Very interesting.

xox

Excellent poem its reallly well written i love it 5/5 omg its so amazing i love it.

WOW this is also awesome. i love it. keep up the great poems. 5/5 love ya always,
***aShLeIgH***

Wicked Sublime POem i loved it
~HazE

Great poem.

Tiffany.xox.

Love it, but not my favorite...

I really enjoyed this poem..nice work..5/5 i like your writting keep it up its awesome..

take care!
thanks for sharing
shannon

Great poem, i liked da words u used to creat da atmosphere, really liked this one

Touched... i can feel the depth with which u wrote this poem... its good
5/5
love
amy

Wow thats intense. nice job!

It was wild and a rather dark poem to me. Very different from my usual preference.

This poem takes your mind dark places, and i love it!