Comments : The Glow

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    hun... i have to admit i am a bit worried by this verse

    This is my time, before it’s too late
    Her pain will soak me through
    I stand before her crimson gown
    With nothing else left to do

    especially

    This is my time, before it’s too late

    I really hope you are ok... Amazing poem... i dont know how you write so many good ones... Brilliant!!

    Take Care!

    MMMWAH!!!
    I Love You!!!

    - .o0 Olipop 0o.

  • 18 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Wow, wondeful poem Toni.

    My favourite stanza was:
    ''Silent tears fall on the floor
    As I realise what I’ve become
    I try to take the pain from her
    But still I am so numb''

    Stay strong hun, You're a beautiful and caring person inside and out and you deserve to live in total happiness. It will get better hun, your pain will go away.

    Take care darlin, sending all my love.

    Hugs,
    Shell xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    ..But we'll bring you back together again, one day <3

    I love yoo, more than you know..

    ♥♥♥
    Take care of yourself..

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    lost for words, so many out standing lines and images. wow
    keep it up, luv always -x-x-x-