Comments : You took my breath

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissta

    you know what i will give you permission to use my name in any of your poems i dont care im happy now and forever will be you left me to shame knowing that you lied to me and now how do i know if i was the one that messed up what if you lied to me during that time how do i know your not the one that screwed up i hope you have learned that hard lesson when your tryin to get back with some one and you lie and they still talk to you that they are just messin because after you lied to me i just couldn't believe anything you said anymore and a relationship needs trust and sorry to say and dare to even say but i dont trust you

  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    what do you mean lied to you? Do you think I should believe any thing you said to me after what you did to me? I dont believe I lied to you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    btw how do you know I was talking about you? I wish you would just tell me things and not keep me blank, You never tell me things that bothered you...
    Why must you always want to fight with me?
    *sigh* I guess if you think that way I am sorry...

  • 18 years ago

    by Holley

    well if your not taking about her than your talking about me. Go ahead use my name. Would you like me to spell it for you its H-O-L-L-E-Y. It's not like you loved me any was you said you would stop doing so many things but you didn't so it wasn't just me. I dont care any more i try to be your friend and fight with my whole family get kicked out of my house because of you and yet i'm the bad person but it's okay is long as it's not you it's fine. yeah i got raped and you still think i didn't. i dont care any more go back to her i was just a waste of 2 yrs. any was you didn't love me to begin with. I tryed to make it work and it would have if you would have only listened to what i was telling you. sorry but i guess this is GOOD BYE.

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    alright?
    :p

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissta

    you go girl he told me how he treated you and when he wrote that poem when we were going out i really had nothing to do with it i even yelled at him because he was so mean to you im sorry i should of just let you have him and now you can

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    i think i am going crazy!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Holley

    you now what krissta i dont think i want him either maybe someone else want's him. He's free! Taking bids.

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    heh o_O

  • 18 years ago

    by Holley

    yeah it hurt's doesn't it. Knowing that we're both out for blood.

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissta

    well holley email me hottiegirl742@msn.com or krissta_masserang13@yahoo.com we will have to talk

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    okey holley thats enough...

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissta

    this is great

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    ya it seem to be I guess
    :o

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I'm loving your style! You are very creative with this poem....i could see many parts of it as a song! Peaces. //ari\\