Comments : Lost Love

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    That was so sweet... I loved it. It was sad though. I think you should change where you put it..I would put it in Love Poems. Sorry to critquie you writing but you have a few spelling mistakes...
    "That last night i hled.."
    "I can feel myseld.."
    I think you mean 'held' and 'myself'.

    Great work though I love the poem overall.
    ~Juls~

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is ok. i like this line the best:
    But the ghost of you will always haunt my dreams

    i think it would be better if the lines were arranged a little differently. but overall nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I love the structure of this its kinda random but it really works well keep writing! xx