Really good poem there . I liked it .
Keep it up
April

good job!

Thats a wonderful poem, sorry it took me a while to get round to my deal, well done that was really lovely, it was so well written, full of feeling, flawless friendship poetry, well done to you and keep it up

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Awesome heartfelt poem. Nothing should be edited. Keep it up

~*~Chrsitina~*~

i like your style, its great...this poem was great. it had lots of emotion, and thats the best. 5/5

I think I have read this before you know...but I don’t remember commenting on it so-Yeah it’s good. Nice setup, like the way some are short and others longer, gives character. x

well done...your work seems very heartfelt...lovely.

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Some of the best poems come straight from the heart. I never change my poems after I post them either. You write about your true feelings so well! ~Brooke~

This is very well writtin! You have a lot of talent! Keep it up!
Much love.....<3
~*hAiLy*~

I never change my poems once I post them either! I have had many broken hearts but they eventually mend. Some of the best poems come straight from the bottom of your heart. Good job! ~Brooke~