thats really sweet and sad. i liked it a lot. its short, but affective.
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this one confused me... it needs to be a lil longer so that i can get the gist of the poem...
take care of you
amanda

Aww this is so sad but realli good!!

Wow, good job. I really liek your poems and how short they are. I am for sure going to add you to my favvies:)

Okay fair enough....good job....

The night he died.
He let the blood flow.

4th and 8th line were choppy needed a few more syllables i have no suggestions because i dont want to simply rearrange the lines...because im not a fan of doing that i try not to myself...i would consider rewriting them...but great poem i love the ideas in your head great concept...5/5

This poem is okay, doesnt flow as well as the others, but its still good 4/5

I found this one really sad rather than dark despite the theme. I liked the way you showd the event from 2 perspectives that was nicely done.
Perhaps a title might be 'Wasted Opportunity' (just a thought)

It was ok, good not great..

it could be longer.. to give more details.

one other thing- i think these two lines should be switched-
But this he did not know,
And since a broken life has no cure,
((and the 'but'should be removed)

also- the as in the last line i think could use some work. im not sure if you wanted it to rhyme with this line or not(And didn't want to go on) if you did i think you should change both, and if you didnt, well the the last line could be much better worded-
ex)
On this suicidal night.
or
He was hurt inside,
And didn't want to live,
So he bade goodbye,
During his suicidal bliss .

i dont kno if you like either, but i do think it needs to be changed at least a little bit.

Hope i helped.

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I thought it was a pretty good poem. I was hoping for a little more description and maybe a longer poem but that's just me. The flow was pretty good so you didn't have problems there. Overall I think it's a four.

Aww

Sad...but I really like this.

Umm...title, title...A Dark Goodbye, perhaps?

Kinda stupid, I know...idk

Anyway, REALLY like this! Really cool...really sad.

5/5
Keep writing!