Pretty good, keep up the good work except proof read a little more because I saw some errors but other than that it was good.

:D hey gd wrk!!! keep it up!!! :D

nice work--love it!! i feel the same about someone and u kno...reading poems like urs helps me get through it. def keep it up!! 5/5

I know how you feel hun...I am still not over someone I was once with and I love someone else now..but we always have that special place for those gone. I promise you will see better days, the same ones I am hoping for. xxx