You've found the key,
And let yourself in,
I so want to tell you,
But don't know where to begin.

i like that verse i get where ur comin from xox fallen

Beautiful poem. I love the way it flows. Keep it up.~Red

awesome emmi!!!!!!!!! r u emmi hill yeh?? lol

ellie x

Hey sweetie! :D How have you been?? Lol i've missed you! :D :D

Thanks for the comment on my poem by the way. :)

Peaces. //Ari\\

fab poem. again it flows perfectly. loved the lines

You crept along the landing,
Snuck down the stairs,
Jumped into my life,
Caught me unawares

an the finally lines. keep it up :)

lu -x-x-x-

That poem shows exactly how Im thinking right now... I love it!
xxx

I'll let the smiley face do the talking lol :)
5

xX velvet kisses Xx

I really like it. it reminds me of a guy i like. good job!

My gosh you've done it again lol... loved it. your choice of words were perfect and the flow was great...i just kept reading and didnt have to pause once...

keep it up.5/5