o.O very interesting...a little confusing...the rhymes seemed a bit forced, but its an all around good poem still..keep it up
~*Freak*~

wow that was really good, i liked your words use, and it made me be able to picture this vision, it was aa rad poem..
5/5
xoxBam

great poem...keep writing ones like this cuz i love dark poems. 5/5
~lindsey