great job, this is a wonderful poem

Wow i loved this poem!! it was awesome!! keep it up!

Love is Suicide

Mariah Dawn

i just cried!!!!
xXx Nicole xXx

I loved this poem. You did a very good job.

Clouds n ur Is.

wow this poem is deep i like it alot ur feeling truly show but cheer up cuz every one goes threw tough times we need to go on but i realy like this poems and plz keep ur head up.
MUCH LOVE AND RESPECT
JOANA AKA JOJO

i can relate

Good god I love that poem and I feel your pain sweety. I feel like that allllllot but I have ONE thing makin me hold on.....

This poem is really good. It seems like you really feel this way.

wow! that was great!!

That was such a good poem! You're a really good writer

absolutly wonderful

aww thats so sad but i love..you a good writer...5/5....and plz read some of my stuff and comment/vote itwould mean a lot and i will return the favor...
-stephanie-

omg..that was a really good poem..i loved it!!

theres only one word for that * AMAZING * !! you have so much talent.. defaintly 5/5
xoxo-megan

BEAUTIFUL JOB!

I like the poem reminds me of the way I live my life in darkness, using my coffin as a shield. Keep up the poetry, you have good way of writing. It is strong and powerful, with your soul in the words creating the images we the readers need to see. Stay strong and keep writing. Paul

great poem very deep i really like it.

wow! nice job! it was very sad though

that poem was awsome i can totally relate check out some of mine keep writtin
#Melanie#

I Loved this poem, its so emotive, so "Deep" but i think the deeper you go the better they come!Welldone