wow....really great. I can relate....5/5

Wow I like this poem and I never thought of it that way!5/5

Jamie

Wow.. Very nice poem. Well written. Well together. I really liked reading it. Good job, Chad.

wow. im really impressed. 5/5
great way of expressing your feelings i can totally relate
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paulette

very truthful expressions in this one. It's sad to me how many people are cutting these days. I just hope everyone knows help is out there

I really like the imagery you used in the poem. You should read one of mines called "I Played Violin" it talks about the same incident, with a different image. nice job

wow that was really well written, sad but well written. the flow to it made me not breathe till the end. great job.

This poem was so sad, I can't say I relate but I think alot of people can. The rhyming was perfect and it flowed very well. ღ

wow amazing rhymes and so much emotion! I loved it good job!!

thus mis really nie i give it a 5/5 chad konw its your turn

i like how this poem is set up. the rhyming is perfect and you didnt force any words to rhyme

wow i really like this poem...your amazing at writing and this is only the first poem i have read...lol...keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I really like this poem...I love the way you wrote it, you're very talented, good job

5/5

DFK

referring slitting your wrists to a game is very clever......the rhyming in the poem was great along with the whole poem!

i liove how you say the the blade is a game master so to speak controlling every move i cant say i relate but i do have a pomes kindaof like yours but keep it commin

Well,there were a few good representations of how you view self destruction,but this action has been outplayed so much in poetry that it is hard to find your poem any different than the rest.

Eh, you dropped meaning at the end of the poem. I liked it, do not get me wrong...but at the end, it just seemed to loose it's value. But still, nonetheless, great job.

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DarkSuicide

So fast paced with so much emotion. that was a sad yet very beautiful poem. great job.

Wow I like the use of words in this poem. I think I read it before but yeah, it's really great! The rhyming was pretty good. keep it up!

Very nice, you used a lot of good words in this poem to get what you wanted to say out. It's all very powerful in a not so long poem which is good! And I do like the end, You did well on that, good job!