Pure As Rain

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Jul 5, 2005


There are stars on her body,
Yet not from tattoos,
There are scars on her body,
but not from Bo-Boos.

Her mind will go blank,
Not one worry will remain,
There is only one thing left,
The raw shiver of pain.

It trickles down her arm,
Feels as pure as rain,
But it is different,
For this is from her vein.

Scar are left behind,
Each one tells a tale,
Never of success,
But always fail.

She doesn't care what people will say,
For she is in total bliss,
She doesn't care if she dies,
For she has no true family to miss.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ssimmes15

    J i love this poem. I think you have great talent.. never stop writing its awesome!

    WA

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wow.. that was really good...
    5/5
    keep writing

    love,
    ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Symera

    I'm here to return a favor.. but I really do love this poem. I was really drawn to it first off just by the name but I couldn't stop reading it and my brother was just calling me so i'm sittin here like hush boy im trying to read lol. Great Job w/ it i can relate to it exactly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenee.Roca

    great job! short but good..:D