"did it turn out okay?"....yes, this poem is awfully good.

I like this poem, a lot. it has good flow, and good content. Isn't fun to go back to the old stuff you wrote?

its really good, even fer a long span of time between the verses!

Yes, it is very good. See it's awesome to have written some thing so long ago and complete it down the line. I've done that...of course not with a 6 year cap though.

I like it very much. You showed the hardships of her life without details. Sad to think that this is the life of many, even a few I know.

Very nice write....hopefully it's not about you or anyone close to you... :) 5/5

it turned out great actualy! lol good job, i love how it rhymes and flows so good. keep writing!

I loved this poem. I think it turned our beautiful. It was sad though. Your a great writer!

You are amazing i am in the process of reading some more of your poems

Turned out exellent!! I have thought about taking some of my older poems from back in high school and redoing them. I should since I can't seem to come up with any ideas these days! Good idea to add on to an older poem! Keep it up! =) ~Brooke~

I think it's better than ok.
I really liked it. 5/5

Clouds n ur Is.

congratulations! Your the the newest member to my favorites list! Great job!!!