i am sorry you had to re-live this memory while writing this...but excellent job....very expressive.

xxx

aww this was sad, I'm so so sorry. great poem though.
Stay strong
and keep writing!

aww.. thats so sad.. but so good.. and i can relate i havent seen my dad since like forever.. hope your okay now tho..

that was really sad...but i loved how you wrote it...good job!

this is a very good poem....i can relate to how u feel....im sry he put u thru this...

great poem...i feel thata way bout my dad sumtimes...but hes still around..but i liked it...if ya have the chance check out my poems and comment on em...ever wanna talk my addys redneckgirladr@hotmail.com...keep writin yer good at it...

great job loved it keep up the great work 5/5 crissie

Wow it brought tears to my eyes.my dad done the same thing and it was when I was 11 months old I am 35 today and it still hurts.so sorry you had to go through this.nice poem it sure hit home but it was nice.
candy