another great one i like them so far ima keep reading!

I really liked this poem, it flowed really nicely. :)

That was brilliant. Wonderful message. I can totally relate to your words. Keep it up and take care.

Nice work, I liked it, I can relate to it. Keep it up.

i lykd it.. but i sorta got lost in the middle, but dun worry, i got bak on track agen by the end.. i lykd the topic and the words u used to describe it.. nice rhyme but the flow wasnt so gr8, and maybe thats wat lost me halfway thru.. other than that, its gud
keep it up
nouna

wow i really liked that:)check out mine sometime<3<3

Full of so many different emotions! It has a great message to it as well. I think in a lot of ways many people can relate to this poem! Take Care! Brooke~