Great emotion and feeling in this poem. I enjoyed reading it!

~*~Christina~*~

aw thats so sad if you really feel that way....great poem....5/5....only advise is to work on the flow just a bit....(notice i said just a bit...the flow was still good)

Emotional, interesting poem, glad I looked at it, your poems are working well.. The emotions were portrayed incredibly well, sorry you feel this way

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Another poem filled to the brink with emotion. You are very good at putting your true feelings onto paper (or should I say screen?), although I find this one to be less magical than I would've hoped. I know, it's a funny thing to say...Magical...But poetry is a form of magic.