thanks guys

Ok you must really hate your dad, really felt the hate!!!! Hope that you are ok?? Great poem, very emotional and sad..

*Hugs sabrina*

hmm i liked this poem. its really good, i like your style of writing. keep up the good work!

Yeah, I like this poem. It's very short and simple to goes straight to the point. One thing that bothers me is when you type "your" I really think you meant "you're".

That's all M'Dear.

"I'm about to blow,
It's all your fault,
I know the truth,
You love me not."

A very nice stanza.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

So your dad cheated on your mom? maybe make that part a little more clear. umm other then that once again your using a pretty basic vocab but thats okay because i think this poem had a lot of feelings behind it the flow was off in some areas but only a few i really liked this 5/5