this is really good! wonderful job!

Very nice imagery depicted. The ending gives it sort of an enigmatic feeling in a strangely satisfying way. Nice work hun :)
-A

excellent poem. im sorry its been a while since i left a comment. times been rough. but my wrists are clean, im hoping that yours are the same. i missed you, im sorry i havent been on much. hope you doing good. i Love you take care. God bless

Nick

amazling written, keep this fantastic work up

brilliant!!!

5/5!!
remembering reading all my other comments..well they all go for this one too.
Jenn.

Great poem. Very well written.

omg! this is great! so sad...I HOPE YOU'RE NOT DOING THIS! REMEMBER THE BIG HAIRY MONKEY NUTS ARE THERE FOR YOU! but still i love this poem! well i love all of them but still! keep it up!

-BIG HAIRY MONKEY NUTS!!!

Love always and forever, Taylor

Shaggers? lol! I missed you so much!!!! This poem was brilliant!! I loved this the most!

Outside these glass walls,
Life carries on the same.
But no one notices my
Insanity becoming untamed.

Sooooooo sad and relative....I loved it and you so much! Thanks for sharing, dahling! Glad to hear from you! Thank you so much for the comment!!! You're so sweet!

Love you lots!

~Sierra

___Meatball Hoagie #2___

awsome job gurly! i hope all is well! i love you and i miss you!

Andrea, this was so awesome! I loved it so much. You really described it well. *Sigh* I wish we got to talk more. I miss you so much. :'-( Amazing poem! I wuv u! <33

~Krissy

*hugs*

Amazing... I loved the way you painted the image and captured the reader.. 5/5 none to less.. Keep your head up and keep writing (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

this is a really good poem and the last stanza was amazing
5/5

Good poem I like the twist to it between what is real and what may not be thanks for the comments!

take care

Vrey good poem! The flow was excellent and the poem itself was awsome! Please check out some of mine when you have time, thanks.
Keep up the good work *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

I like the poem its really good. it sounds lyk things that i write.

wow, that was amazing, i loved it.
im kinda speechless now, i really thought it was wonderful, great work Andrea!
take care bud,
-Allen

Amazing poem, sorry it took me a long time to comment, my favourites has decided it doesnt want to show me when people have written more so i have to guess, this was brilliant, well worded with a flawless flow, keep it up

xxxx

Absolutely amazing! This is easily the best poem I have read in a long time. Take care, and I hope all is well.

Awesome poem. keep up the great work. love ya always,
**aShLeIgH***

Amazing, brilliant! i loved it! keep up the work!