o the smell of sweet revenge...

wow i loved it, it wasn't bad at all, you undermine yourself!!! it was great and very sad, but it fits so well together

very emotional

Luv Always
Lucy***

ooo.. sweet vengeance.. gr8 poem.. i still din reach that part of my lyf, tho.. so i cant relate.. but i understand.. ur talented.. keep up the gud work
take care
nouna
thnx 4 commenting

wow chrsitopher. look dude im so sorry that i havent been commenting. i was unaware of your new poems.

i do still love you tho. just ta ler ya now

WOW
~HazE

A never ending pain
that grows stronger each day
i pray to god that my tears
will wash the sin away

The usage of tears washing the hurt away used very well. Thanks again for the comment. Even though you said this one isn't done very well, in deeper thought it is. Revenge can be this simple and having these feeling of pain are normal but with the ending it just makes it worth everything.