Comments : I LOVE YOU but

  • 18 years ago

    by samara

    . . .wow . . .very very good poem . . . i can relate perfectly. . . good job . . .
    xoxo samara

  • 18 years ago

    by lauren.

    i really like that. it actually made me want to cry. awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tanya

    I must say that at first I wasn't gonna read this b/c it was so long... I'm glad I did b/c if I hadn't I would have missed out on something so good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Augusta

    I really like this poem. When one writes whats inside their heart, often its nothing but poetic, as is your case. Its very good, very real, and very sad. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffanie

    Great job...
    you did an awesome job and i can relate to what u r goin through..
    Just rememeber thing scan only get better..
    *Tiffanie*

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Daniels

    You did a great job... It was soo good! I can totally relate to it to. It was so sad tho it made me cry a little! keep up the good workd 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    wow.. this is such a good poem.. and omg i feel the same way.. ive been heartbroken for this guy for what seems like forever now..</3

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    OMG... Im about to cry this poem was grt. I can tell it definately came from the heart and I truly feel ur pain. I hope ur ex could still be ur friend atleast u'll still have him in ur life! THIS POEM WAS REALLY LOVELY. I can really relate to it. U just dont understand how much I love this poem. LOL! Keep writing bc this poem really touched my heart. GRT JOB!

    Love
    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    ExElent work i really loved ur poem!! mwaz stephy :)

  • 18 years ago

    by karen

    that was wonderful!! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by mandi

    I LOVED IT!!! oh my gosh! its like you read my mind! thats crazy... keep up the good work.... 5/5!
    xoxo
    mandi

  • 18 years ago

    by litto lost girl`

    wow..dat was a very gud poem..i can totally relate to it..i've been through this also..& i knw how it feels. i hope everything is going gud for u. ^_^

    much ♥
    -lost_gurl

  • 18 years ago

    by ¤Brenda¤

    That comment at the end was sweet. An the poem wasnt bad you can tell alot of heart went into it :)GoOdJoB

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    You expressed yourself, and that what makes a good poet to start with. Your writing will just get stronger. I have written a different type of love, if you would like to read. Plus big hug for you, as that was 1,000 tears from my heart for my boat to sail to your words of love. Take care Paul * *

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariel

    Wow. This is definitely a great poem. Good job. U better make sure this guy reads this, u hear?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jeff

    Great poem written with great poetry skills.You did very well.Jeff

  • 18 years ago

    by christina

    very awsome poem i really liked it ..... im kinda goin through the same but i dont know how to write my feelings down thy r just locked in side i guess lolll well anyways
    grt job u should keep writin
    always smile :)
    peaceeeee

  • 18 years ago

    by mandi

    GO GIRL! you got a featured poem! ugh! i'm so jealous..... lol..... congrats!
    xoxo
    mandi

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    It can be better, but I still found myself to love it... It has a very good meaning, soemthing a lot of people can truely relate to, I could have but when I could have it would have been in a diffrent way, WOWH well I hope you can get taht and It didn't confuse you taht much, lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrew

    That was a lovely poem you wrote there. It started to made me cry due to my situation... I love someone who still loves their ex... but good poem!