Comments : Dear Diary, My Sister Died Yesterday...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammy

    Very emotional write my friend. Sad situation, I only hope she knew the Lord. I will lift you & her family up in prayer. So sorry to hear about this.
    Take care & God bless you always!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydie

    I didn't really like it, it didn't really make me feel sad or have any emotion what so ever, you need more emotion in your poems...

    -Lyd

  • 17 years ago

    by Juls

    Thats super sad. Im sorry for your loss whebever she died. So many car accidents it so sad. 3 teens died in my school last year just from accidents.

    {poem wise}
    I miss her so greatly
    And Mom and Dad do, too
    Without my best friend
    I don't know what we'll do

    This stanza confused me with the 2 do's and the too. but other than than it was good =]