wow great use of words, good job. keep writing.

i like it. seems sorta eerie...i don't know the word to describe it though...

xxx

Very unique! It could almost go under dark poems! A lot said in just a few words. Very powerful but you expressed yourself in a creative way! Good write! Take Care! Brooke~

O....that is sad. When you get used to having that one person there to wipe your tears away....and then they don't wipe them anymore.....

I know how you feel.

Love it

~*~Christina~*~