by Hayley
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wow amazing! you have courage to stop, its hard to stop! I'm proud of you, be strong! great poem! keep writing, thanks for the comment on my poem! awesome! hugs-hayley |
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This was great!!! I love how I can relate to it, being that I used to be bulimic as well... and I cut. Great job... great rhyming and nice flow 5/5 |
by erikka baby
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That was so sad. But I loved it |
by Amanda
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I am soooo happy 4 u sweetie, bye bye Mia and don't come back to sabrina. Anyways another great poem from you and i am truely proud of you!!! :) |
by stephanie
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aww i like it 5/5...nice poem...plz read and comment/vote on someof mine it would mean a lot thanks... |
by Dawson
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wow that was very good i loved it |
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thats such a powerfull poem well done! i love it, keep up the good work! |
by Samantha
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Interesting. I like this better than the other two I commented on. It has more substance and more for the reader to think about. |
by Brookeღ
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That was exellent such a great message of freeing yourself of the past. A lot of people should read this it sends a pwerful message! Very well written! I'm glad to hear you are letting go and moving forward in a positive way. ~Brooke~ |
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aw that was so sad but so good! |
by *liZ*
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great job... Yes, I totally relate to you, as you can see with my own poetry lol.. |
by *liZ*
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hey i just awrote another one.. your poem anorexia hell inspired me. it's called "All about Ana" check it out:) it's short and not near as well written as yours but i was spilling out my thoughts. tell me if you like":) |
by SCARECROW
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Very emotional poem, that's the best thing about it. And thank you so much for the lovely comment on Danse Macabre, I really appreciate it. |
by Mandy Lou
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I really like this one...OMG! Great story...I'm so glad you decided to take back control and pride and go back to the way you were! It's a great story! |
by Clarissa
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it was definitly well written, but kinda sad, but u did a good job expressin ur self |
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oh wow this is deep..u sound like an awesum person |
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Oh my...that is very creative...I love the parts saying you're taking back control, saying good-bye to your "friend" is a wise decision...and about cutting no more...great! |
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So well written , i can relate with that feeling of fighting back and it is not an easy thing to do |