That is really good!!keep writing!! you got good talent!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

Well written, I really enjoyed this one. I think I could have read a bit more but I really did enjoy it. Again thanx for a great read.
Tim

Hoping each day goes by faster
Not able to socialize
In hopes that someone will rescue them

For some reason I Think this might sound better as, "In hopes that someone would come to the rescue." I don't know, it's your poem.

And it's a great poem too. Maybe break it up everytime you write "For The..." But seems like evryone can relate to that. I know I could very much in the past and even still a bit for one part. Keep writing.

I really liked this poem, it's almost as if you were watching in on my life. I think this poem descibes very clearly the definition of depression.

This used to be me, it still is a little bit. nicely written.

An emotional and well written write. Your touched on some very truthful issues in this. Good job.

Again, This was fantastic. I really loved this poem.

In hopes that someone will rescue them
For the person who puts everyone before themselves
Solving everyone’s problems
But cannot realize they are ignoring themselves
[I loved that part so much.]

There's not much else to say. I don't think there should be anything changed in this one. It was great the way it is. I could relate a little aswell. So that's even better. You've done an excellent job! Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Beautiful. i think that you should break it into stanza with every for the person. the end is perfect. nice

What a great poem, really well written and hits such a nerve with how so many people feel. 5/5 xx

This was so seep and meaningful...also something I can relate to...
I loved your use of imagery in this, as always.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

This is realy good : )
keep writing poems like this
<3 jess