Comments : My Life

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    This is a sad poem with an almost uplifting message at the end: write and don't let things take control of you.

    My life is a story,
    Written in rhyme

    I loved this part especially.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem but a really sad one, I like the way you express your feelings, it is just so great...
    keep it up, and great job again
    5/5