great job! 5/5 luv the imagery very nice also luv ur name

Very nice. Good word choice and it had great imagery. Of course it sounds more a story though. But still good.

Remarkable work...lovely job with the imagery and story...white wolves are beautiful... I love it, Weeping Wolf. You have a real gift...

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Wow you are a really talented writer keep it up!

That was so beautiful. I really loved how you brought such a graceful, stunning creature to life. Great job!
~Midnight Sun
p.s. Sry never been to norway, my name is just a variation of a name for the moon. : )

Ah well done. this poem was stunning. its your name on this site too! good poem all round.

5/5 David