That was breath taking! =)

I have no complaints here, I heart it so much.

My favourite stanza were:

"To this day I think to myself,
I love you mom,I love you dad.
But I murdered someone, and am in hell
my red wings don't fit so well."

Especially "My red wings don't fot so well."

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This is a very good poem. Wow. Just keep up the good work! I really likes the way it was written. It rhymed beautifully and the flow was wonderful. I really loved this poem. It hit me in the heart, because I can realate a lot. Good job.
~BJ~

I found some forced rhyming in the first stanza and you spelled sane wrong as sain? you might want to change that...other then that i like the flow and the story behind the words...4/5

I loved the emotion.

Your words are just... wow. Amazing job there, 5/5

Wow..no doubt a part of u died...for real...don't worry u still got me thou...this is a great poem and i know that u know that...i love all of ur poems 5/5

That acutually gave me chills..."the angel i killed was me" amazing..really and truly..

XoX maureen

Once again very depressing but really really good!! n_n

This one iss goodd.
its pretty sad thoo.. good job thoo.
you should try writing one happyer poem.. all your poems seam a little darkk.. so maybe to lighten up your page a little put a happy one in.. 4/5