Comments : My Honest Goodbye

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Kay

    Wow, this poem is completely amazing. I can relate to so much of it. This part...

    "Don't cry for me, don't pity me, this isn't what I need,
    i fade away from everybody's selfishness and greed.
    They thought that it was funny to make fun and call me names,
    but they didn't see the damage caused outside their twisted games."

    ..was especially my favorite. I hope things get better. Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydie

    Long, but very well written - good usage of words!

    -Lyd

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimmie

    wow i love it and i think more people than you think would understand. and if i can ever help please im me at Kasperskyz or im on myspace as Kimmie i dont have a pic
    or email me

  • again, wow...
    simply amazing...
    i loved it.

    <3ash (bleedingblackroses)

  • 18 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    Dancing flames and roses float around your dreams for me,
    may peace and faith engulf your heart for all eternity.
    nw that is just amazeing not just that the hole poem and the others i read as well brilliant!!!