Actually I think some of your religious poems I have read have the best flow...

thanks!

I loved this one. it has a deep beautiful meaning. I loved its meaning. it has a good flow too.
what other thing does a poem
need? so beautiful. love you so much,
marjan

thanks i have just written a new one!! its called The Tale Of Tears please read it!!

I had no problem getting the flow of this poem. very inpirational...5 I have added you to my favorites

Nice and inspirational. Keep writing! a 5/5.

i luv tht poem, it was gr8. :D keep it up

This is very good!! It gives a great message!! Great job!! 5/5