you wrote this very well.
it's so sad. great job. keep it up.
take care,
marjan

that's just brilliant... awesome follow up :) great work

emma x

wow i read both parts its very good better great keep it up
take care
HS
check my poems if u can

Yay (ok maybe the wrong word choice but...) im glad you wrote part two. Its layout is different from part one as well which helps give variety. Well thought out poem. I like the way it has different line amounts in each stanza. Cant think of anything bad to say so great poem. X

it was really good plz check out my poems and rate thanx

this went well with the part one and i really liked it!
great poem

Wow I'm speechless. Very well done.

wow... you never cease to amaze me. you are truly one of the best authors i've ever read. keep it up!
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So well written. you capture so much emotion with every word