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I'm in love with the last line!
I loved it
thx for the r/c

~Nat~

i feel like dat alot i love your poem

Absolutely beautiful! Sounds like true love! I hope things will work out for you! ~Brooke~

I liked the other ones better cause they were on a more universal level. Thisone seems to be a little more about personal experience.

Beautiful poem...I love this part especially:

"You're fading away
In my mind

All I see now
Are your Blue-green eyes"

I personally think you could do more without so much rhyming, but that's your style and it works.

xxx