DAMN GURL YOUR POEMS GET BETTER AND BETTER.I ENJOY READING ALL OF THEM! HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON.

that was so good.... i loved it.... keep em coming!

Nicely written, it flowed nicely and is definately good. I enjoyed it!! great job! 5/5

great ending. I enjoyed reading it.
much love,
marjan

wow hun thi is rlly gd! 5/5 xox

Thats areal good poem i really like it

Wow thast good! better then i can write!!

OMG! awesome poem!! can't wait to read more!! =)

That was a really good poem. It had a really good flow to it and i liked reading it! good job. 5/5